Allithea(B3)all [5-01]
http://www.fanfiction.net/u/72028/
A New Enemy(5-01)
"Their intent was just to get us out of the picture
long enough to rob New York blind. "
(some awkwardnesses & misspells..
decent story, tho')
Lots of sick turtles-
device of radio transmitter
imbedded in shard of green glass.
slashed into Raph--
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Miscalculation(8-08)
17 chs.(1-09)
The Time of Unknown:ch.13-10-13-09
9-09n.b.writer capable of the most creative
themes, still some spelling & grammar
errors. tho'..
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addendum-5-08: oh dear...
another quote-one that puts me in my place..
"Devotees of grammatical studies have not
been distinguished for any remarkable
felicities of expression."
okay...but I still think strongly that if you
can't grammatically express creative thought,
you may risk confusion and misunderstanding on the
part of those reading your work.
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